I promised more posts, so here you go. I will update this story as i post it on the message board i RP on.
Quick Summary of the Rem/Ebross Storyline up to now:
Terenpetto was a namekian warrior. Soon after coming to earth he was attacked by a saiyan. During the battle, terenpetto threw up a ki barrier jus as a saiba warrior self desctucted. The subsequent mingling of energues caused a sort of fusion. Teren was mortally wounded however, and discovered that the saibawarrior was somehow within him.
As he died, he spit out an egg.. Remrow. Remrow was 3 foot tall and had characteristics of both a namek and a saiba. Over the years, their arose a great disturbance within his mind. The mentalities of remrow, terenpetto, and the saiba were all battling for control of rems mind. This lasted for years. Eventually, remrow couldnt take the battle anymore and went into a coma as he exited the hyperbolic time chamber.
One of rem's friends took his unconscious body to namek, and while their the evil within his soul was extracted and placed into a crystal. The cystal was subsequently broken, and the entity quickly stole the body of one of the shamens. (This is ebross) After declaring his vengeance upon the namekian people for what they tried to do, Ebross escaped off Namek.
Rems body was also purified, he was transformed into a full namekian, the saibaness purged from his body, as ebross was purged from his mind and soul. Rem was taken back to earth, unaware of what had happened and unaware of ebross's existence. He awoke some time later, in Dende's care. He wasn't ever exactly told what happened to cause the changes within him, but came to accept them as they left him at peace. Ebross, on the other hand knows of rems existence. Ebross's underlying goal is to eventually destroy all nameks. For a few years rem has been watched over by a god, the hostess who lived in the nexus. (Which is a triumvire of planets basically) good, neutral, evil.... Ebross has been gaining power so that he can eventually destroy namekia. Alot of other shiz has happened in between, but thats the gist.
Rem has been training under the hostes for years, in order to prepare to meet his fate, his destiny, his challenge. See, in every other single parallel dimension rem is dead. Either ebross has consumed him, or remrow is still alive... But is evil. That is why in this dimension, he must survive. Rem has just taken ebross to the nexus. Ebross is the fate that he has been training for. he has unknowingly aided the being who has the possibility of being the cause for his demise.
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Story: Ebross
Part I.
Chapter 1: Ebross, the Pure?!
He knew he was dead. There was no other explanation. He had been in pain, had felt his soul being destroyed, and then it was over. Now, Ebross was on his back, staring upwards at what appeared to be a beautiful desert sky. The stars, there were so many, and so clear. “I don’t see any clouds.” He comments on the scenery. “I guess theirs no clouds in hell.” The namekian’s eyes close for a moment, thinking over his fate for a few moments. Where was the hell fire? The demons? The eternal torment that he had coming...
“Who are you?” Ebross hears the voice, but can’t place it. Somehow it seems to be coming from both nowhere, and everywhere. It’s a smooth voice, almost angelic. That, ebross knew, couldn’t be right. Their was no way he was in heaven, no way their was an angel speaking to him. He couldn’t defy the afterlife though, if in fact someone had made a mistake on the paperwork... well, that was their problem.
“I’m Ebross...” he begins. “I... I don’t know what else. Where am I? Why are their so many stars? Is this heaven? Are you an angel?” So many questions were reverberating through the Namekians mind. Something was really wrong here. Somehow, he was different. It felt as if he was renewed, but incomplete. It felt like he had somehow been purged of all he once was, recreated in a new light. For the first time in his life, ebross was experiencing a feeling he couldn’t peg. It was peace.
“Shh...” The voice comforts him softly. “Ebross is it? Everything is fine, this is the Nexus.” The voice was so very smooth, like silk, comfortable yet beautiful. “Look, I remember you, Dark warrior. I don’t know what’s going on here, but I will find out.” The voice gains a bit of authority to it, as if in an interrogation. “Stay here, don’t move. I’m not sure exactly what that rapier did to you, to us, but I will find out and I will return. Gah! Where are you hostess!”
The voice drops to a whisper during the last bit, as if it was a secret. Ebross had secrets. Or did at one point, he couldn’t remember those secrets anymore. From somewhere nearby the fallen Namekian heard a strange popping sound, and he knew that somehow he was alone once again. “Wait.” Ebross says, his voice holding a measure of desperation. He was scared, but at the same time was comforted by his surroundings. He was alone, but before him was the entire universe, each star, each galaxy was before him. It was as if all he had to do was reach out and touch each of them. But he didn’t. He didn’t know how. Didn’t know why.
“Wait...” Ebross whispers once again. But the stranger was already gone, and ebross was alone.
Sunday, August 20, 2006
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2 comments:
Very interesting
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im hoping to one day take this story and alter it out of the dbverse and into more of a serious fiction. who knows.
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